Fire spirit (The Rage of Fine)

Look! A fine spirit. Why is she destroying everything and lighting up fire everywhere? Isn’t she the kindest spirit among other spirits? Yes, your sight but for the answer to your question let’s look onto the story.

Decades ago, where humans and some mythical creatures used to live together. In earth there

were four spirit fire, water, earth, and air. Everyone had their own specialty and protected the earth. But the people were scared of the fire spirit. They thought she could harm them if she got mad so they were scared and didn’t bother the fire spirit much. The fire spirit was sad but still she tends to help the humans and soon after people weren’t scared of her anymore. The fire spirit pushed herself more to help humans and did more work than the other spirits. All this spirit had their own God and their God saw how hardworking the fine spirit is, so they decided to give her something for her hard work. One day the Gods held a meeting for all the spirits. They praised the fire spirit and they gave the fire spirit something. The fine spirit was so happy and she thanked the Gods. The gift given by the Gods was a small child. They knew she loved kids, so they gave her, her own child. She named the child Yuma. She still worked but she had a kid now, so she hired a babysitter named Lilian to take care of her kid. She now started to come home earlier than usual to take care and play with her kid. Whenever she used to rescue or help someone, they used to give her food, clothes, furniture etc. so there wasn’t any problem in buying things. Yuma was a pure innocent child. She listened to everything her mother or babysitter said to her and she also never asked for expensive gifts. Whereas, the fire spirit used to spoil Yuma with lots of toys, gifts etc. Many years passed and Yuma is finally going to school for the first time but the fire spirit was afraid of Yuma being in danger yet still she had to fulfill her daughter’s wish.

One day the fire spirit came home late and was really very exhausted. She calls Yuma’s name a couple of times and thinks, “Hm… maybe she’s asleep. Well it’s already past 9 pm.” She closes the main door and walks toward her daughter’s room and sees all the light rooms are on. She again thinks, “If they were asleep they would have turned off the light. But it’s probably nothing. Maybe Lilian forgot to turn off.” She turns off the lights and heads to her daughter’s room. She walked inside Yuma’s room and saw that it was dark. She tried to switch on the lights when she tripped onto something. She thought it wasn’t anything and ignored it then she turned on the light and started to look at the trip. She looked down only to find the babysitter and her daughter died on the floor. Lilian was holding Yuma tight in her arms which means she protected her till she died. The fire spirit couldn’t believe her eyes so she wiped her tears and started shaking them lightly and said “Hey, hey! Wake cup…. I know this is a prank. This has to be a prank please make up. Baby, Yuma please wake up.” Tears rolled down her cheeks. After crying for a while the fire spirit wipes her tears and carries both Lilian andYuma in her hands and walks in the silent night streets. After walking for a while she reaches the middle of the city. She slowly starts to put on a fire everywhere because of her anger. The people of the city start to run everywhere to save their own life. The rage of the fire spirit was really bad and her power burnt down the whole country. Many people died because of her anger. Other spirits tried to stop her but she was somehow unstoppable. The fire spirit destroyed everything that was near her. Even the Gods of the spirits regretted giving her a powerless human daughter. When the people were a little girl fell on the road and started crying. The crying noises made the fire spirit come towards her. When she heard those crying noises it made her come back to senses slowly. That little girl

reminded her of her daughter. But when she came back to senses it was too late. She saw what she did because of her anger and instantly regretted it. People were throwing rocks and eggs at her and said “Monster.” Everyone said she was a monster but the little girl got closer to her and hugged her. The fire spirit couldn’t control herself so she broke down into tears and cried loudly. The whole city went silent and started feeling bad for her.

When she was crying, the whole city started healing. We know dead people can’t be back but the injured people were healed and no wounds were left. They were happy and look at the fire spirit but the smile on their face quickly disappeared. The fire spirit was turned into a stone while carrying dead Lilian and Yuma in her arms. It is said that she gave her own life spirit to the city. Even if she got turned into a stone, legends say that she’s still protecting the city. People started to worship the stone statue of the fire spirit. They started cleaning. putting flowers and

all. The end.

Unknown: Ah! That was a beautiful story. I would like to listen to more of this. But I’ve a question, why is your name similar to her daughter?

Unknown: Who knows maybe it’s just a coincidence or maybe not.

  • Sujika Rai, Grade 12

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